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Monday, March 14, 2011

Page 1 & 2 of Super Powered Extraordinary Dynamos

Here are pages one and two of my story. You will meet the Moore family of Dave, Lynn, and Ethan. Ethan is a boy with autism. Dave and Lynn are working their lives through with help of numerous teachers and aides, but always feel like they aren't getting anywhere. They will never give up on their son, but things are about to change when life takes a new turn.

Ethan Moore - our main character
Lynn Moore- Ethan's mom
Dave Moore- Ethan's dad
General Warbird- video game character


Page 1

Sometimes the mightiest heroes are the ones that you never expect them to be. They are labeled for how they look and how they act but never viewed as the hope we need! Why would such extraordinary powers be bestowed upon individuals that can't always control themselves? Fate never lets us in on its plans, but it always runs its course if we like it or not. This is the beginning of a story of many that were chosen to overcome their own dilemmas and the ones that are created by an evil they have never experienced... even in their own minds.

Page 2

“Well there goes another one.” Lynn

“Are you serious Lynn? That is eight aides in the last two months! What was this one’s excuse? Dave

“He said that Ethan was taking a break from his school work and was playing his video game.” Lynn

“What so weird about that? He likes his games and it helps him stay calm. “ Dave

“He was playing the game without holding the controller. “ Lynn

“There are game systems like that.” Dave

“He was sitting on the ceiling, we don't have a game system like that and I put his controller in the closet last night so he wouldn't play all night. “ Lynn

“He was probably just exaggerating like all the others. Not something that happens everyday now is it. We know Ethan is special, but come on, really... sitting on the ceiling... good one! He has autism, he isn't Captain Superpowers!” Dave

“I know Dave, but we better go see if Ethan is alright.” Lynn

“Alright, but he isn't going to even realize what we are talking about. He will be sprawled out on his beanbag chair without a care in the world, taking something apart.” Dave

Lynn+ Dave go upstairs.

Talking from inside the room... “General Warbird, do you think we will be able to take out the Doom Low army’s frontline?”  Ethan

“With you on the controls Ethan.. I think the victory is ours! “ General Warbird

“Who the heck is he talking to? Did you let a friend come over?” Dave

“No, just the aide that high-tailed it out of here.” Lynn

“I hope he isn't mimicking a new behavior from school. I don't have time to deal with another one!” Dave

“The first line of Doom Low soldiers was nothing for the Helix Brigade General Warbird.” Ethan

“Keep throwing everything you got at them Ethan, deploy the Aerial Banshee.” General Warbird

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